Not bad. But I think there are some problems:
#1 Starting from 0:37, the drums part for the drop, especially for the snare is too loud. Yes, you can have the drums part to be louder a bit to support the vibe of the drop but in this case, is too loud to enjoy it.
#2 The piano for the intro sounded flat. It's like it doesn't have any human touch in it. You might need to consider to vary the velocities between each key so that the feeling is there.
BUT, there is one thing I found interesting is that you even include a bass guitar from 0:25. It adds a touch of funky vibes before the drop starts.
I wish that you will consider the criticism I gave you above and good luck producing ;)